Missing ingredient

Worked on laying out the rest of my timeline tonight. Looks like it's going to be about 8 minutes unless I add more to the script. I am pretty sure I am going to need at least 15 minutes for my thesis requirement. So I may need to do a sequel or think of another short kid's film that would be a good compliment to "Why don't we ride zebras".

Here's a quick sequence I worked on tonight.